I was a student at Owairaka District School.
Kia ora Dahran,Charlotte here from the SLJ team.I love your summer poem! You have done such a great job at including sounds and making a clear picture in my mind.I think the line "clouds move like shampoo foam" gives me such a clear picture of shampoo foam gliding across the shower floor. Brilliant! Keep up the fantastic writing!Charlotte
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Kia ora Dahran,
ReplyDeleteCharlotte here from the SLJ team.
I love your summer poem! You have done such a great job at including sounds and making a clear picture in my mind.
I think the line "clouds move like shampoo foam" gives me such a clear picture of shampoo foam gliding across the shower floor. Brilliant!
Keep up the fantastic writing!
Charlotte