Well done on completing this activity, this is a great example of a summer themed haiku poem. It's got a great sentiment that I think all of us can connect with, now that the quarantines have been lifted and we've been inside for a large chunk of the year, there's now a great feeling of freedom and being allowed to explore and get out this summer.
One thing to suggest is that your last line is just one syllable too many so you could go back and reword that one to fit the 5-7-5 syllable count.
Hey Dahran,
ReplyDeleteWell done on completing this activity, this is a great example of a summer themed haiku poem. It's got a great sentiment that I think all of us can connect with, now that the quarantines have been lifted and we've been inside for a large chunk of the year, there's now a great feeling of freedom and being allowed to explore and get out this summer.
One thing to suggest is that your last line is just one syllable too many so you could go back and reword that one to fit the 5-7-5 syllable count.
Great work Dahran,
See you later in the comments,
Daniel