Monday 13 September 2021

Coin operated (with 100 word story)🚀🪙🧒

 



Hi bloggers
Here is my coin operated story.
It is about a boy who wants to go to the moon but figures out how to do it.
Do you want to go to the moon one day.
Blog ya later







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4 comments:

  1. Mrs Haines13 September 2021 at 16:51

    Kia Ora Dahran
    I can see you have worked hard to plan your ideas and I enjoyed reading your finished story. It reminded me of standing next to the coin operated ride ons with my children when they were younger, maybe they had been dreaming of going to the moon too!

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  2. Rachael Oshea14 September 2021 at 12:25

    Kia ora Dahran. Thanks for sharing your Coin Operated story on your blog. It is hard to get all the details and information across in just 100 words isn't it. Great summary of the short film. Keep up the great mahi.

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  3. Miss Whysall14 September 2021 at 12:32

    Kia ora Dahran, you are doing a great job of posting your learning online - tino pai! Do I want to go to the moon one day? Hmm... I'm going to say "no thanks". I have lots of places I want to visit here on Earth first. Would you like to go to the moon or another planet?
    Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)

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    1. Anonymous14 September 2021 at 12:58

      Hi Miss whysall
      Thank you for commenting on my blog.
      Yes Maybe one day I would like to go to the moon.
      Blog ya later

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