My name is Renee and I am from the Summer Learning Journey Team. Ka pai for your hard work on this excellent blogpost. I really appreciate how you looked at the facial expressions of the men in the photographs and crafted the dialogue between them to match. I also like how you have used humour in your comic, this made it really memorable and enjoyable to read. Did you enjoy making this comic strip? I laughed a lot thinking about the fisherman losing his false teeth and then finding them in a fish!
I also really love the character profiles and original story you have included on slide 2 - this is really creative and interesting. You are clearly a very talented writer. What other things do you like to write about?
Keep up the excellent mahi I can't wait to see your other posts over the summer.
Kia Ora Dahran
ReplyDeleteMy name is Renee and I am from the Summer Learning Journey Team. Ka pai for your hard work on this excellent blogpost. I really appreciate how you looked at the facial expressions of the men in the photographs and crafted the dialogue between them to match. I also like how you have used humour in your comic, this made it really memorable and enjoyable to read. Did you enjoy making this comic strip? I laughed a lot thinking about the fisherman losing his false teeth and then finding them in a fish!
I also really love the character profiles and original story you have included on slide 2 - this is really creative and interesting. You are clearly a very talented writer. What other things do you like to write about?
Keep up the excellent mahi I can't wait to see your other posts over the summer.
Mā te wā
Renee (SLJ)