Thank you for posting another of your stories onto your blog, and for sharing your learning with us. I liked the added detail that you included about the parade which helped paint an image in my mind. Remember that all proper nouns need to start with a capital letter. Could you reread your story and add those in? If you are unsure of where they need to go, let me know and I will help you out.
Morena, Dahran
ReplyDeleteThank you for posting another of your stories onto your blog, and for sharing your learning with us.
I liked the added detail that you included about the parade which helped paint an image in my mind.
Remember that all proper nouns need to start with a capital letter. Could you reread your story and add those in? If you are unsure of where they need to go, let me know and I will help you out.