Hi Dahran. My name is Neena. I am in room 24. I hope you are safe in your bubble. I like your writing it is very good. What is your favourite part in your writing? Blog you later Neena
You used some great descriptive words Dahran, I could imagine the characters out in the dark street at night. I think they would have been wise to listento the talking lamp post!
Thank you for sharing your writing on your blog. Before I started to read, and because of your title, I wondered if your story was going to be based around a crime. With a name like Criminal Drive it doesn't sound like a very safe place at all. I would love to know how your sister was saved after having been gobbled up by the beast.
Hi Dahran. My name is Neena. I am in room 24.
ReplyDeleteI hope you are safe in your bubble.
I like your writing it is very good.
What is your favourite part in your writing?
Blog you later
Neena
You used some great descriptive words Dahran, I could imagine the characters out in the dark street at night. I think they would have been wise to listento the talking lamp post!
ReplyDeleteMorena, Dahran
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing on your blog. Before I started to read, and because of your title, I wondered if your story was going to be based around a crime. With a name like Criminal Drive it doesn't sound like a very safe place at all.
I would love to know how your sister was saved after having been gobbled up by the beast.
Hi, sarah!
DeleteMy sister wasn't really gobbled up by a monster. The story is not real. I just made it up!