Kia ora Dahran. Thanks for sharing your Halloween Fun House story. You started by building some good suspense and describing your surroundings well. Unfortunately the ending left me a little wanting as a reader - I want drama and action!! Have you ever done a haunted house ride?
Kia ora Dahran. Thanks for sharing your Halloween Fun House story. You started by building some good suspense and describing your surroundings well. Unfortunately the ending left me a little wanting as a reader - I want drama and action!! Have you ever done a haunted house ride?
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