Thursday 28 October 2021

story








Hi bloggers

Here is my funhouse story.

Blog ya later.
 

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Dahran. Thanks for sharing your Halloween Fun House story. You started by building some good suspense and describing your surroundings well. Unfortunately the ending left me a little wanting as a reader - I want drama and action!! Have you ever done a haunted house ride?

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